You have seen an advertisement for a 'weekend work' in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. Now you want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing your interest. In your letter, introduce yourself explain why you think you would be suitable for the job ask what work you would be expected to do You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr. Thomas Dilian - Grand Hotel Manager, My name is Cassy. I am writing
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coherence cohesion
You might want to better organize the content by clearly separating the three required points: introduction, why you are suitable, and questions about the job.
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Make sure to fully develop your ideas and provide enough details to demonstrate your suitability for the job and to ask the required questions.
task achievement
You've made a good start by indicating your interest in the job and mentioning your experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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