The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of unemployed
people
in three different parts of the world from 1993 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
Japan
witnessed an upward trend in the unemployment rate, the opposite was true for the
UK
and other regions in the
EU
.
Also
noticeable is that there were significantly more
people
in the
EU
being unemployed compared to their counterparts for the majority of the timeframe.
Initially
, the percentages of
people
who did not have jobs in the
UK
, the
EU
and
Japan
were 11, 9 and 2
percent
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respectively. After a slight growth, the figure for
Japan
remained stable at 3% from 1995 to 1999.
In contrast
, there was a sharp fall in the proportion of unemployed
UK
people
to 5%, which was at the same rate in
Japan
in 2001.
While
people
in other European nations were unemployed most in 1997, at over 11%,
this
figure dropped steadily to 9% in 2001. Regarding the remaining years of the period,
while
the percentage of unemployed
UK
people
stabilized at 5%
to
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2005 and experienced a 1% rise
at the end
of the period, that of
Japan
hit its highest point at 6% in 2003 and still kept the lowest ranking in the chart in 2007, at 4%. Despite a steady fall, the
EU
became the region with the highest unemployment rate
at the end
of the period, accounting for just under 8%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, japan, uk, eu with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Fluctuation
  • Economic growth
  • Economic recovery
  • Comparative analysis
  • Steady decline
  • Modest stability
  • Broader economic challenges
  • Economic reform
  • Structural issues
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