The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The bar chart provides detailed information regarding the
number
of volunteers
and paid workers
in various roles within the Australian sports sector in 2015. It presents data on the amount of assistants
and staff in four distinct jobs: coaching, referees, therapists, and other sections.
Overall
, it is evident that volunteers
significantly outnumbered paid workers
across most roles, with coaching boasting the highest number
of assistants
and referees having the fewest. However
, the number
of paid workers
fluctuated across all sectors.
The role of coaching saw the highest number
of assistants
, significantly outnumbering paid workers
. Specifically, there were about 74 volunteers
compared to only 45 paid workers
.
The role of referees exhibited a higher number
of paids
about 39 people, Correct your spelling
paid
pairs
pads
while
the volunteers
were slightly lower at 31 population.
Similarly
, in the therapists' role, the total of assistants
stood at 45 , while
paid staff numbered slightly lower at 40 people .
By contrast
, in the other sections, the number
of assistants
marginally exceeded that of staff, with approximately 59 assistants
compared to 49 paid workers
, respectively.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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