The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The bar chart provides detailed information regarding the
number
of Use synonyms
volunteers
and paid Use synonyms
workers
in various roles within the Australian sports sector in 2015. It presents data on the amount of Use synonyms
assistants
and staff in four distinct jobs: coaching, referees, therapists, and other sections.
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Overall
, it is evident that Linking Words
volunteers
significantly outnumbered paid Use synonyms
workers
across most roles, with coaching boasting the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
assistants
and referees having the fewest. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of paid Use synonyms
workers
fluctuated across all sectors.
The role of coaching saw the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
assistants
, significantly outnumbering paid Use synonyms
workers
. Specifically, there were about 74 Use synonyms
volunteers
compared to only 45 paid Use synonyms
workers
.
The role of referees exhibited a higher Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
paids
about 39 people, Correct your spelling
paid
pairs
pads
while
the Linking Words
volunteers
were slightly lower at 31 population.
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Similarly
, in the therapists' role, the total of Linking Words
assistants
stood at 45 , Use synonyms
while
paid staff numbered slightly lower at 40 people .
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By contrast
, in the other sections, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
assistants
marginally exceeded that of staff, with approximately 59 Use synonyms
assistants
compared to 49 paid Use synonyms
workers
, respectively.Use synonyms
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