The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate three popular name trends for
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
in the UK from 1925 to 2000.
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Overall
, Linking Words
boys
' Use synonyms
names
have experienced random trends Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
girls
' Use synonyms
names
are stagnantly going upward. Both Use synonyms
boys
' and Use synonyms
girls
' Use synonyms
names
reached their peak popularity in 2000 except for Daniel which had its maximum popularity in 1975.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
boys
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names
, Oliver and Alexander started at the same number which is 1 per Use synonyms
thousand
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while
Daniel started strong at 4 per Linking Words
thousand
. In 1950, they all are in different situations, among them all, Daniel is having a steady increase reaching the highest number which is 12 per Use synonyms
thousand
in 1975, but it decreased a bit to around 10 per Use synonyms
thousand
in 2000. Oliver has a fluctuative trend but Use synonyms
finally
rocketed to 11 per Linking Words
thousand
in 2000, Use synonyms
while
Alexander remained almost the same until 1975 Linking Words
then
increasing to around 10 per Linking Words
thousand
in 2000.
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Lastly
, the Linking Words
girls
' Use synonyms
names
, Sophia, Isabella and Emily have a similar trend with each other. The two of them remained the same until 1975, only Emily is a bit different, its trend going upward from 1 per Use synonyms
thousand
in 1950 to around 4 per Use synonyms
thousand
in 1975. Use synonyms
Finally
, each of those Linking Words
girls
' Use synonyms
names
has its highest number in 2000, Emily and Sophia are 11 per Use synonyms
thousand
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while
Isabelle is around 10 per Linking Words
thousand
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, names, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "trends" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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