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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the
production
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 of three types of forest
products
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 from a European nation over two decades, from 1980 to 2000. Looking at the
overall
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 trend,
it is clear that
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 the
production
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 of
paper
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 gradually increased year by year,
while
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timber
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 and
pulp
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products
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 fluctuated throughout the period.
To begin
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 with, the initial
production
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 of
pulp
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 dropped to approximately 2.5
million
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tonnes
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 from 6
million
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tonnes
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 in mid-1983.
Timber
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products
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 immediately increased to 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985,
while
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paper
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production
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 reached only 6
million
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tonnes
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. At the same time,
pulp
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production
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 rose to 7
million
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tonnes
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. A decade later,
paper
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production
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 had grown to 9
million
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tonnes
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,
while
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pulp
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production
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 had risen slightly to over 8
million
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tonnes
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.
However
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,
timber
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production
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 fell to approximately 6.5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1995. In 2000,
paper
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products
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 remained at the top of the list with 12
million
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tonnes
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,
pulp
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production
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 reached 10
million
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tonnes
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, and
timber
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production
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 fluctuated and reached approximately 7.5
million
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tonnes
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, products, paper, timber, pulp, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Production levels
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Comparison
  • 20-year period
  • Data
  • Forest industry products
  • Percentage
  • Amount
  • European country
  • Analysis
  • Observation
  • Graph
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