the graphs below show the trends in three boys' and girls' name which are currently popular in the UK

the graphs below show the trends in three boys' and girls' name which are currently popular in the UK
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graphs below show the trends in three boys' and girls' name which are currently popular in the UK
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The diagram delineates the trends between
boy’s
Change noun form
boys’
show examples
and
girl’s
Change noun form
girls’
show examples
names
Use synonyms
which were popular in the UK.
Over all
Correct your spelling
Overall
show examples
, there were
three
Use synonyms
famous
names
Use synonyms
for boys which were Daniel, Oliver and Alexander throughout four timestamps. Similar to boy’s
names
Use synonyms
, the
three
Use synonyms
most used girl’s
names
Use synonyms
in the UK were Sophia, Isabella and Emily. For boy’s
names
Use synonyms
, the name Daniel was the most popular
ones
Fix the agreement mistake
one
show examples
with four per
thousand
Use synonyms
in 1925. Increasing in the following years, Daniel peaked at 12 per
thousand
Use synonyms
in 1975
then
Linking Words
decreased a little bit in 2000. The other
names
Use synonyms
Oliver and Alexander saw some
increased
Replace the word
increase
show examples
with Oliver
peaked
Wrong verb form
peaking
show examples
in 1950,
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
show examples
down dramatically in 1975 and
increased
Wrong verb form
increasing
show examples
in 2000. Alexander was the least popular of the
three
Use synonyms
names
Use synonyms
but had a massive surge from 1975 to 2000. On the
girl
Change noun form
girl's
show examples
side. All
three
Use synonyms
names
Use synonyms
had similar
increased
Replace the word
increases
show examples
with Emily
was
Replace the word
being
show examples
the most popular
Use synonyms
names
Fix the agreement mistake
name
show examples
which peaked at 10 per
thousand
Use synonyms
in 2000 followed by Sophia
also
Linking Words
reached 10 per
thousand
Use synonyms
and Emily
the
Add a missing verb
being the
show examples
least famous
Use synonyms
names
Fix the agreement mistake
name
show examples
with almost 10 per
thousand
Use synonyms

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words names, three, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "trends" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: