The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The charts give information about the percentage of polyglot students at one of England's universities at the beginning of the 2000s and 2010s. In general, Spanish was the most popular language to be studied by British learners over a decade
while
a tiny proportion of them could master German and two other languages other than Linking Words
English
.
In 2000, exactly 30 per Use synonyms
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of students spoke Spanish Use synonyms
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whereas
the people who could not speak other languages accounted for one-fifth. Linking Words
Moreover
, the number of persons mastering French and another language Linking Words
besides
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English
stood at 15 per Use synonyms
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each. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, only one out of ten learners had the ability to be fluent in Linking Words
English
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as well as
German and two other languages. A decade later, Spanish remained the most well-known literature to be recognized by students beyond Linking Words
English
with a rising percentage to 35 per Use synonyms
cent
. At the same time, people who were able to speak Use synonyms
English
and another language expanded to 20%. Use synonyms
Finally
, the other categories Linking Words
were
either remained or decreased to just 10 per Unnecessary verb
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cent
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