You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the change in production (Million Tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the change in production (Million Tonnes) of three products in the forest industry in a European country.  

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the alteration in the number of
production
of three different products from
forest
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the forest
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industry, which are measured in
million
tonnes
in a European country.
In
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From
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1980 to 1985, all three products had an upward trend in their
production
rates.
However
, after 5 years, both
timber
and
pulp
had a declining trend.
Timber
had reached 9
million
tonnes
of
production
before it fell to 6.6
million
tonnes
, meanwhile,
pulp
production
had
slighly
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slightly
slight
decrease
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decreased
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from 5 to 4
million
tonnes
in the same year.
Surprisngly
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Surprisingly
, it was only paper
production
which had a dramatic rise from 3
million
tonnes
to 9
million
tonnes
in 1980 to 1995, before ended at 10
million
tonnes
in 2000.
In addition
,
in
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from
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1995 to 2000,
timber
and pul
experience
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experienced
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a slight increase in their quota of
production
.
Timber
had a little rise to 7
million
tonnes
, and
pulp
rose to 6
million
tonnes
.
Therefore
, these figures
had shown
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showed
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a higher change than their initial
number of
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apply
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production
rate in1980.
To conclude
, even though
pulp
and
timber
had a fluctuation rate of
production
, all
the
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apply
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three products
had
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ended up producing more than the first time they started and tended to increase.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, million, tonnes, timber, pulp with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Million Tonnes
  • Forest industry
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Milestones
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Outperformed
  • Underperformed
  • Stable
  • Timeframe
  • Data analysis
  • Implications
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