The graph below show the percentage of math graduates and other graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012
The two graphs give information about the proportion of full-time workers who hold a university degree and
also
give data about the average salary of these graduates
who studied maths and the students who studied other subjects.
Overall
, it can be seen that math
graduates
had a higher rate of having a full-time job than the other graduates
, it can also
be observed that the average salary of both graduates
enjoyed an upward trend. Additionally
, the salary of other graduates
tends to increase more steadily than math
graduates
.
To begin
with, in 2004 math
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the math
graduates
percentage started at 80% while
other
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the other
graduates
rate was under 70% and both experienced a rise in 2005. While
other graduates
increased sharply to nearly 90% and decreased slightly to about 85%. In 2008, math
graduates
only increased to above 80% and continued to rise at the same rate as other graduates
then
fell down steadily to about 75%. Other graduates
also
continued to fall each year and ended up at the same percentage at the start of 2012
Turning to the remaining features, math
graduates
salaries increased a large amount of money every 2 years but the amount of cash shows a different number while
other graduates
also
started at 41,000 dollars in 2004 but increased an amount of 2,000 dollars every 2 years in the mentioned timeline and only doubled the cash once between 2010 and 2012.Submitted by [email protected] on
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