The given bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of physical activity performed by Australian men and

women

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in different

age

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groups throughout 2010.

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,

at

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in

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the

age

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group of 15 to 24

years

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old, the male gender started off with the highest performance at 52,8% and

female

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the female

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gender at 40,7%. Over the

years

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, the percentage of exercise for the male group declined until it reached the low

at

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of

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39,5%, exactly at the

age

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of 35 to 44

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old.

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, the percentage for

women

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continuously grew until it reached

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at 53,5%, exactly at the

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group of 55 to 64

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old.

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, at the

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of 65 and over, the proportion of physical activities for men and

women

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met at a similar percentage of 46,7% and 47,1% respectively.

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, the amount of physical activities done by the genders

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each

age

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groups

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group

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,

whereas

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the peak for men happened when they

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young adults and

women

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when they

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were

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middle aged

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middle-aged

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