The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

The boom of job offers in the

city

encouraged more suburban people to move

in

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the

city

where they live closer to the workplace and could save time from traffic and public transport.

While

this

unexpected phenomenon

cause

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a decrease in the comfort of

city

dwellers,

this

essay will discuss several problems and possible solutions. On the bright side, the growth of population in the

city

area contributed to a more productive workforce and

increase

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in economic growth.

However

,

this

development is parallel with the increase of private cars and other

transportations

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transportation

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swarming the streets, which will end up polluting the

city

horrendously.

Furthermore

, people are starting to feel extremely uncomfortable

to travel

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in packed public

transportations

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.

For instance

, the occurrence of

life threatening

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life-threatening

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cases from people getting trampled underneath the crowd because of rush hour.

Nonetheless

,

here

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are several urgent steps to be applied before the

city

becomes dangerous, especially for young children and elders. By focusing on mobility, it is hoped that the life quality in the

city

could be maintained by a better crown organization.

Firstly

, there has to be an upgrade for the quality of public

transportations

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,

such

as electric busses that will contribute to better air quality.

Secondly

, there should be an addition

for

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the train and bus schedule, in order to slow down the pace.

Thirdly

, the government should give incentives to workplaces that are willing

set

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up their office in areas that are less crowded. In conclusion, the rapid growth in population may have several negative

side

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, including

the

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apply

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air pollution, rush hour, and public safety.

However

, there are some solutions to fix

this

problem,

such

as upgrading and organizing public transport

,

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and giving incentives to offices located

at

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in

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a less crowded area.