You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should The percentage of household energy use in Australia: Percentage of household energy use in Australia The percentage of greenhouse gas produced in Australia: Greenhouse gas produced in Australia

You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should  The percentage of household energy use in Australia: Percentage of household energy use in Australia The percentage of greenhouse gas produced in Australia: Greenhouse gas produced in Australia
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In the first chart, we can see the percentage of household
energy
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use
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in an average Australian household. In the second chart, we can see the percentage of
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gasses
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produced
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energy
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use
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shown in the first chart. We can see that heating and cooling produce the most
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gasses
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while
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being the third most when it comes to
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used. The least
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of
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gasses
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produced is by
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energy
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. We can see that other appliances produce the least
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of
greenhouse
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gasses
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in relation to
the
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energy
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use
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. Despite contributing to 24% of
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, the
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gasses
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produced by other appliances only
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to 16%. Heating and cooling
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contribute the most
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gasses
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in relation to the
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energy
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used. Heating and cooling contribute 20% of
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use
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but produce the most percentage of
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gasses
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at 38%. That's over 1.5x the
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