You are advised to spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words. The percentage of household energy use in Australia: Percentage of household energy use in Australia The percentage of greenhouse gas produced in Australia: Greenhouse gas produced in Australia
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In the first chart, we can see the percentage of household
energy
use
in an average Australian household. In the second chart, we can see the percentage of greenhouse
gasses
produced as a result
of the energy
use
shown in the first chart. We can see that heating and cooling produce the most greenhouse
gasses
while
being the third most when it comes to energy
used. The least amount
of greenhouse
gasses
produced is by stand by
Add a hyphen
stand-by
energy
. We can see that other appliances produce the least amount
of greenhouse
gasses
in relation to the
Correct article usage
apply
energy
use
. Despite contributing to 24% of energy
use
, the amount
of greenhouse
gasses
produced by other appliances only amount
to 16%. Heating and cooling Change the verb form
amounts
also
contribute the most greenhouse
gasses
in relation to the amount
of energy
used. Heating and cooling contribute 20% of energy
use
but produce the most percentage of greenhouse
gasses
at 38%. That's over 1.5x the amount
greenhouse
Change preposition
of greenhouse
gasses
for the amount
of energy
usedSubmitted by kelly on
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