You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
This
table
demonstrate
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a
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the
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rate of
chages
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change
changes
of
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in
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population
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the population
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in four countries and
forecast
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forecasts
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to
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for
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2025 and
to
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apply
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2050. Those four countries - Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and
Republic
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the Republic
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of Korea, could be
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divided
into three groups. The first group with
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increasing
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of
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population
encompasses Argentina,
that
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starts
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started
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with 34
millions
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million
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of
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people
in 2003 and
reaches
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will reach
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population
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a population
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of 62
millions
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million
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of
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people
in 2050, and Indonesia, with starting
popultion
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population
of 238
millions
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million
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of
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people
,
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and
rising
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a rising
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of
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quantity of
people
to 312
millions
. In the second group there is only Italy with
population
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a population
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of 54
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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people
on
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in
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2003 and
expected
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an expected
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decreasing
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of
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population
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the population
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to 45
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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people
on
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in
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2050. The third and
the
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last
group -
Republic
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the Republic
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of Korea - with 48
millions
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million
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of
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people
on
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in
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2003, lightly climbing to 52
millions
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million
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of
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people
on
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in
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2025, and stable status
of
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population
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the population
a population
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, the same number - 52
millions
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million
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of
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people
, expected
on
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in
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2050.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, millions, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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