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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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demonstrate
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a
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the
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 rate of
chages
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change
changes
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population
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the population
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 in four countries and
forecast
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forecasts
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to
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 2025 and
to
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2050. Those four countries - Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and
Republic
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 of Korea, could be
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 into three groups. The first group with
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increasing
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population
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 encompasses Argentina,
that
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starts
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 with 34
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millions
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people
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 in 2003 and
reaches
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population
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 of 62
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millions
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people
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 in 2050, and Indonesia, with starting
popultion
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population
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millions
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people
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,
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quantity of
people
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 to 312
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. In the second group there is only Italy with
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population
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 of 54
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millions
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million
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people
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 2003 and
expected
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decreasing
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population
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the population
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 to 45
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millions
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million
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of
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people
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 2050. The third and
the
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last
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Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea - with 48
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millions
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million
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of
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people
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 2003, lightly climbing to 52
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millions
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million
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people
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 2025, and stable status
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population
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the population
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, the same number - 52
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millions
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people
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 2050.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, millions, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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