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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the graph illustrates the
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number
 of citizens for four areas for 2003 and impending quantity for 2025 and 2050.
overall
,it can be seen from the chart that, all
counrties
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countries
counties
 will show
the
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 upward trend
to
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next
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the next
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 25 years.
In contrast
 to the Italy which will decline to 45.
Additionally
,Indonesia had been exceeding other countries approximately 4 times. looking at the details ,we can find out that,
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 of Korea expects
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the increase
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 to 52 ,but after steady results between 2025 and 2050.
Whereas
, Argentina predicts
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 dramatical
rising
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in
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 double
On the other hand
, Italy is
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 country with opposite
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scenery
scenary
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scenery
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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