the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accoomodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accoomodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated bar graph represents data from the Englands and Whales describing the volume of owned households with rented
accomodation
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accommodation
over a century between 1918 and 2011.
To begin
with, back in 1918 over 75% of
people
owned houses which gradually reduced over the period reaching the lowest point in 2001 at only 30% and which grew marginally
with
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ending at over 35% of
people
owning houses in 2011.
On the other hand
, renting
an
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accomodation
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accommodation
was at
all time
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low back in 1918, which rose significantly reaching a peak highest point at
marginally
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70% of
people
renting
an
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accomodation
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accommodation
.
However
, near the end of
2011
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this
volume reduced slightly
at
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over 65%.
Overall
, over the century it is observed that
people
stopped owning a house and started renting
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accomodation
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accommodation
.
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