the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accoomodation in england and wales between 1918 and 2011. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrated bar graph represents data from the Englands and Whales describing the volume of owned households with rented
accomodation
over a century between 1918 and 2011.
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accommodation
To begin
with, back in 1918 over 75% of people
owned houses which gradually reduced over the period reaching the lowest point in 2001 at only 30% and which grew marginally with
ending at over 35% of Change preposition
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people
owning houses in 2011. On the other hand
, renting an
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accomodation
was at Correct your spelling
accommodation
all time
low back in 1918, which rose significantly reaching a peak highest point at Add a hyphen
all-time
marginally
70% of Correct article usage
a marginally
people
renting an
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accomodation
. Correct your spelling
accommodation
However
, near the end of 2011
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2011,
this
volume reduced slightly at
over 65%.
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to
Overall
, over the century it is observed that people
stopped owning a house and started renting an
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accomodation
.Correct your spelling
accommodation
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