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The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  write 150 words.

The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  write 150 words.
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As it is shown in the line graph I see the
amount
 of
tea
 and
coffee
 imported by Canada, the
UK
 , the USA and
Germany
 in the year 2007 in tonnes it is clear from the graph that the
amount
 of
tea
 in the
UK
 is higher than the other
however
 coffe
amount
 is less than the other .
According to
 what is shown and what I got from the graph Canada has a higher
amount
 of
coffee
 and Canada and the US mostly the same
amount
 but in the
UK
 I noticed the highest
amount
 of
tea
 is unreasonable ,
Germany
 has mostly the same in
coffee
 and
tea
 but the difference is only 10000 like 5% In sum,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 could say that the highest
amount
 of
tea
 is in the
UK
 and the highest
amount
 is in
Germany
 The reasons are people in the
UK
 use
Tea
 every second time as same as in
Germany
 they use
Coffee
 a lot
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, tea, coffee, uk, germany with synonyms.
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