The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The given column chart illustrates the

percentage

of households in owned and rented

accommodation

in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011,

It is clear that

rented

accommodation

was popular from 1918 to 1961.

According to

the diagram, in 1918 the

percentage

of rented

accommodation

was the highest with about 78%,

However

, the rate of rented homes dropped dramatically between 1918-2001, but increased

approximately

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by approximately

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5%.

Secondly

, the rate of owned accommodations was at the lowest level in 1918,

Nonetheless

, the

percentage

of owned homes

have

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apply

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increased gradually from 1918 to 2001 but had a significant drop in 2011.

Overall

,Nowadays the probability of English and Welsh families that own an

accommodation

is higher than

the

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in the

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previous decades,

whereas

the

percentage

of rented

home

Fix the agreement mistake

homes

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these days

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

show examples

lower than

last

6-8 decades.

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