The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates the spending on three different
categories
which is
food and drink, restaurant and hotel, and entertainment among five different Correct subject-verb agreement
are
age
groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
Overall
, while
expenditure categories
of people under 60 years of age
were evenly distributed and included a significant percentage of spending on entertainment, the older generation's spending was more unevenly distributed.
At first,
the percentage of ‘restaurant and hotel’ steadily decrease as getting older. Also
, it is interesting that this
categories
percentage Change noun form
category's
have
less than 15 % in every Correct subject-verb agreement
has
age
group
, while
aged
61 and 75 Correct article usage
the aged
group
have Change to a plural noun
groups
most
Correct article usage
the most
less
figures, only 2%.
It is noteworthy that the food and drink Correct quantifier usage
apply
categories
reported less spending in under
30 Correct article usage
the under
age
group
, while
other groups reported first
expenditure Correct article usage
the first
is
‘food and drink’ except Correct your spelling
as
to
Change preposition
for
61
and 75 Correct article usage
the 61
age
group
. Only two groups show significant changes in spending, recorded at over 20%. These are the figures for entertainment spending in the 61-75 age
group
and 'food and drink' spending in the over 76 age
group
.Submitted by kopopig on
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