The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world between 6 countries which is North America, south America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia.
The pie chart shows the
pertcentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
water
used for various works in six regions of the world among 6 nations which are North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
. Overall
, except North
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in North
America
and Europe other countries consume most of water
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the water
in
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for
agriculture
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agricultural
purpose
.
To start with, North Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
America
and Europe take
use of Correct your spelling
make
water
in industrial nearly 50% whereas
, South America
has 71% usage in farming. However
, these 3 countries have less water
consumption for Correct article usage
the dosmetic
dosmetic
area which is nearly 15%. Other than Correct your spelling
domestic
this
, south part of Correct article usage
the united
united
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United
nation
contain 16% Fix the agreement mistake
Nations
in
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of
factories
usage and north part Change the noun form
factory
use
30% Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
in
irrigation.
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of
Moreover
, africa
, central Change the capitalization
Africa
asia
and Change the capitalization
Asia
south east
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south-east
asia
have maximum usage in agriculture and about 7% in regular use. Change the capitalization
Asia
Furthermore
, industrial sectors at
least under 12%.Add a missing verb
are at
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