The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of Indian nations and Chinese from the year 2000 until now,
As well as
the expected growth or decline by the year 2050. From an
overall
view, the Indian nation represented a constant growth rate throughout the whole period,
while
the people of China increased in number but not as
significant
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as the other nations. First of all, In India the population in 2000 was only 1,000 Billion it showed a stable increase over all the years, And is expected to reach 1,600 by 2050.
Secondly
, china nation started with almost 1,250 which is 250 Billion more than Indians,
Then
starts
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to climb to about 1,430 by 2025. After that starting to decline slightly reaching 1,400 which is still more than what the Chinese started with. In comparison,
Although
, India had the lowest amount of individuals to start with it is expected to outnumber China by more than 200 Billion people.
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