The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men amd women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of
men
and
women
who held them in 1999,
it is clear that
men
are mostly
populated
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paid
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in
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for
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skilled
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their skilled
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and
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apply
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vocational
diploma
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diplomas
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.
According to
the chart,
women
are mostly qualified
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for in
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in
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an
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Undergraduate
diploma
,
Wheras
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whereas
men
are
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have
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the lowest than all other qualifications
in
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for
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Undergraduate
diploma
,
However
, both genders share similar percentages
in
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for
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bachelor's
degree
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degrees
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.
Furthermore
, there is a huge difference in the percentage of females that are qualified
in
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for
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vocational
diploma
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diplomas
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than
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to
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men
do, males are 80% highest than females which is a high rate,
on the other hand
,
women
are mostly undergraduate
diploma
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diplomas
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,
In addition
, the rate of females that are undergraduates is approximately double the percentage of males. In conclusion,
men
have a higher amount of educational degrees in three categories as shown in the chart,
Whereas
women
are only higher in two degrees.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, diploma with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • levels
  • post-school qualifications
  • proportion
  • men
  • women
  • held
  • clear gender disparity
  • Certificate I
  • Certificate II
  • Certificate III
  • Certificate IV
  • Diploma or Higher
  • highest proportion
  • decreases
  • overall
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