The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The flowcharts provide key information about the process of
silk
cloth and the life cycle of the Use synonyms
silkworm
.
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Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the lifecycle of the Linking Words
silkworm
is a cyclic process, Use synonyms
while
the production of Linking Words
silk
cloth is Use synonyms
a
complex. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, the Linking Words
silkworm
formation takes almost three months to complete, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
silk
production takes simple steps to create the goods.
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According to
what is shown, the initial formation of the Linking Words
silkworm
life starts with, Use synonyms
first,
the insect lays its egg on the mulberry leaf, after 10 days the worm's larva gets out from the egg and starts to eat its leaf. After 4-6 weeks the worms are surrounded by Linking Words
silk
threads, after which they start to form to cocoon with only 4 days. Use synonyms
Finally
, after 16 days the insects are completed to form moths.
In terms of clothing production, Linking Words
the first step is
selecting the cocoon, Linking Words
then
boiling the material in the water to unwind the thread to 300-900m, Linking Words
following
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it undergoes a dye machine and twists it before that. Linking Words
Lastly
, weaving the material to make it Linking Words
silk
goods.Use synonyms
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