The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015
The chart compares the number of
volunteers
and paid workers
in various roles namely coaching, referees, therapists and other sections in the sports complex of an Australian town in 2015.
Overall
, the attention of most free workers
was located on coaching while
the role of referees attracted the volunteers
which were the least numbered. In addition
, the number of workers
whose attention is attracted by money isn't a big difference between all of those sections.
However
, working as a referee could not make an interest in both types of workers
who were volunteers
and paid workers
, people whose attraction directed to that field were 30 and 40 respectively. When the count of volunteers
for coaching was more than 70, the number of people who work for money, in this
field was only 45.
In the therapist sector, the difference between paid and free workers
was 2 people and they were counted as 40 and 42. Moreover
, workers
in other sections were 58 volunteers
and 48 paid workers
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