The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the supply and demand of
electricity
in ten
countries
across the globe in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the Chinese were the leading manufacturers and users of
electricity
tools,
while
the Americans and Russians followed in the second and third position compared to the remaining seven
countries
.
According to
the data, people in China generated 5.398
billion
kWh
, which
were
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of their communities by 5.322
billion
kWh
in terms of
electricity
usage.
Additionally
, the productivity level of electronics in the United States and Russia was
also
sufficient to provide their societies' demand for electric goods for doing daily activities. Both
countries
were able to produce 4.099
billion
kWh
and 1.057
billion
kWh
of
electricity
throughout the year, where there were demands of 3.866
billion
kWh
and 1.038
billion
kWh
.
On the contrary
, in other
countries
,
such
as Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea, the number of production and consumption of electrical goods varied, for each under 1000
billion
kWh
in 2014. Similar to the top three
countries
, the amount of
electricity
generation was mainly higher than its consumption. In Germany,
however
, their society appeared to consume 582.5
billion
kWh
, slightly higher than its production of 526.6
billion
kWh
of
electricity
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, countries, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • top ten countries
  • comparison
  • leading producers/consumers
  • highest producers
  • similarities
  • differences
  • relationship
  • significant gap
  • global scenario
  • balance
  • imbalance
  • overview
  • highlighting
  • identify
  • discuss
  • mention
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