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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant. Write at least 150 words. Carbon Emissions by Country thousand metric tonnes 1800000 1600000 1400000 1200000 1000000 800000 600000 400000 200000 • 1975 • 1990 # 2005 USA Germany United Kingdom China Canada India

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries during three different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant. Write at least 150 words. Carbon Emissions by Country thousand metric tonnes 1800000 1600000 1400000 1200000 1000000 800000 600000 400000 200000 • 1975 • 1990 # 2005 USA Germany United Kingdom China Canada India
#minutes #bar #amount #carbon #emissions #countries #three #years #information #features #comparisons #country #thousand #tonnes #usa #germany #kingdom #china #canada #india
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The given chart illustrates the level of
carbon
 emissions in six various nations
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 the years 1975, 1990 and 2005.
Overall
,
transmission
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the transmission
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 of
carbon
 in
USA
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the USA
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 and China reached its peak in 2005. Despite
this
,
United
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the United
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 Kingdom and Canada remained very less in three years. It is worth noticing that the
carbon
footprints
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 in
USA
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the USA
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 was counted
12
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at 12
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thousand
 metric
tonnes
 in 1975, which
inclined
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increased
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 throughout the time period and reached
at
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16
thousand
 metric
tonnes
 in 2005. Interestingly, in China, the count of
carbon
 ejection was recorded below 40
thousand
tonnes
 in 1975,
then
 rose significantly double in 1990. In 2005, there was a massive resurgence to a high point of more than 14
thousand
tonnes
. As
it
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is shown in the chart, the number of
carbon
 emissions in Germany was just around 20
thousand
tonnes
 which
was
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 followed by another three countries i.e
UK
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the UK
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, Canada and India. 1975 was the only year when the emissions of harmful gases
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 comparatively very low in rest five countries than USA .
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