The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.

The given line graph compares the proportion of domestic waste recycling in the UK, France and Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the recycling rates in the UK and Germany increased over the period while it actually decreased in France.
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The given line chart depicts the percentage of domestic waste which
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recycled in the UK, France, and Germany over 10 years starting in 2005. At first glance, all categories experienced an upward trend with the exception of France. Interestingly, in 2005, the
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between each
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15%. In 2005, UK's recycling rate
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up and started remaining stable from 2007, but in 2009, it
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again to peak at over 60% by 2015.
On the other hand
, by 2015, the
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for Germany had a
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pattern that
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climbed up incredibly to reach approximately 55% to be the second-highest
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in the graph. Surprisingly, it did not
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any decline. In 2005, the highest figures
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related to France underwent a dramatic decrease to under 30% in 2013 and immediately recovered after that to reach 40% by 2015.
Furthermore
, based on the data about the proportion of recycled waste in Germany which is the lowest
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in the
last
year illustrated on
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is alarming that people should have solutions to improve waste disposal
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to enhance
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life quality
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.

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