The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
the charts provide information about the
use
of
water
in six different regions across the globe
overall
, it is shown that
Europe
and
the
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North
America
use
water
the most for industrial
porpuses
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purposes
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whereas
the five other regions
use
the most amount of it in agriculture both
Europe
and North
America
use
most of
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the
their
ther
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their
water
on
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for
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manufactural usage
however
, North
America
uses
water
for agriculture far more than
Europe
does because
how
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of how
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massive it is
whereas
,
Europe
use
water
for domestic
porpuses
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purposes
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more than North
America
up to two percent all the five remaining regions
use
water
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the most for agriculture with Central Asia being the most and South
America
being the least
however
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, however
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, South
America
use
water
for domestic
uses
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use
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more than the other 4 by a quite margin followed by Africa next by 9
percent
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per cent
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words use, water, europe, america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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