The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
the charts provide information about the
use
of water
in six different regions across the globe
overall
, it is shown that Europe
and the
North Correct article usage
apply
America
use
water
the most for industrial porpuses
Correct your spelling
purposes
whereas
the five other regions use
the most amount of it in agriculture
both Europe
and North America
use
most of Correct your spelling
the
their
ther
Correct your spelling
their
water
on
manufactural usage Change preposition
for
however
, North America
uses water
for agriculture far more than Europe
does because how
massive it is Change preposition
of how
whereas
, Europe
use
water
for domestic porpuses
more than North Correct your spelling
purposes
America
up to two percent
all the five remaining regions use
water
the most for agriculture with Central Asia being the most and South Add the particle
to water
America
being the least however
, South Add the comma(s)
, however
America
use
water
for domestic uses
more than the other 4 by a quite margin followed by Africa next by 9 Fix the agreement mistake
use
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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