The charts below show the proportion of British Students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the proportion of British Students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The supplied pie charts illustrate how many
students
were able to speak other languages
except of
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English
in
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at
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the
university
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of England in 2000 and 2010. It can be clearly seen that nearly a third of
students
could speak Spanish.
However
,the pupils did not prefer to learn German over the whole period. In 2000,roughly a third of
students
could speak Spanish (%30),compared to 2010 with %35 of Spanish speakers.
Moreover
,20 per cent of
students
did not speak any other languages in 2000 which was halved to 10 percent in 2010.
Following
this
,15
percent
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of
students
were able to speak another language in 2000,
while
approximately a quarter of pupils (%20) could speak another language in 2010.
In contrast
,the proportion of
students
who preferred to speak French was %15 in 2000.
However
,a tiny fraction of
students
could speak French with %10 in 2010.
Additionally
,the percentage of
students
who chose
speak
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only German
remain
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unchanged
wit
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with
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10
percent
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per cent
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from 2000 to 2010.
Furthermore
,the number of pupils who could speak two other languages was %10 and %15 in 2000 and 2010,respectively.
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