The bar chart shows the literacy rate of people who can read and write by region and gender in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart shows the literacy
rate
of people
who can read and write by region and gender in 2011.
These charts can help us to identify a percentage of people
who can read and write.
As you can see,in some regions like Central Asia and Central Europe,rates of literacy are higher than others and very close to 100 percent
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per cent
people
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However
,in some countries which are located in south and west Asia ,the lowest rate
of literacy belongs to them.
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rate
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to others.
On the other
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hand,
women
have the lowest rate
in sub-Saharan Africa in comparison with other regions in the chart.
Generally in all of these regions
we have more than 50 percent of men and Add a comma
regions,
women
who are able to write and read.
In conclusion
we have a range between 55 to 95 percent of men and Add a comma
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