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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates a plan for a new school in different sites in
Canterbury
 town. There is one site option is located in the town
center
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centre
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 of
Canterbury
,
while
 the other school site in the west of
Canterbury
.
Canterbury
 is located next to Sturry from
north-west
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the north-west
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 and
Catham
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Chatham
 from
south-east
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the south-east
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 has many facilities
such
 as
university
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a university
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 which is located in the north of the city and a housing area in the
center
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centre
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 of the city,
also
 there are main roads from
north-west
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the north-west
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 to the south-east , and it has a huge countryside The most popular location
in
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is in
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 the
center
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centre
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 and near to accommodation area in the south of
Canterbury
.
Moreover
, it is only 7 km away from Chatham.
While the
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The
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 other school area is in the north-east of
Canterbury
 and only 5 km away from Sturry.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canterbury with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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