The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of gas, coal,
petrol
, nuclear and other types of energy
produced by France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, while
coal remained the most produced item, other sources were the least in both the given years. Interestingly, the production of all forms of energy
grew with the exception of petrol
over ten years.
In 1995, coal, gas and petrol
accounted for approximately 29% of the energy
produced. Analysing the pie chart further
, nuclear energy
and other sources of energy
stood at 6.40 and 4.90% respectively.
With regard to 2005, the production of coal and gas increased by about 1% each. On the contrary
, the manufacture of petrol
reduced by almost 10%, finally
settling at just under 20% in the final year. Moving ahead, energy
from nuclear sources was 10.10% in 2005 and the production of other kinds of energy
nearly doubled over the decade.Submitted by Writing8
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