The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of gas, coal,
petrol
, nuclear and other types of
energy
produced by France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
,
while
coal remained the most produced item, other sources were the least in both the given years. Interestingly, the production of all forms of
energy
grew with the exception of
petrol
over ten years. In 1995, coal, gas and
petrol
accounted for approximately 29% of the
energy
produced. Analysing the pie chart
further
, nuclear
energy
and other sources of
energy
stood at 6.40 and 4.90% respectively. With regard to 2005, the production of coal and gas increased by about 1% each.
On the contrary
, the manufacture of
petrol
reduced by almost 10%,
finally
settling at just under 20% in the final year. Moving ahead,
energy
from nuclear sources was 10.10% in 2005 and the production of other kinds of
energy
nearly doubled over the decade.
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