The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs here illustrate the worth of
produces
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that
were
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brought from Australia and Japan to
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New Zealand in the span of 10 years, from 1994 to 2004. The imported amount is calculated in New Zealand
million
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dollars. The products brought from Australia in 1994
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were
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at 4000
million
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dollar
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, where it was at 3000 in
case
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the case
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of Japan. After a brief stagnant period,
the
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Australian
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import
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imports
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shoot
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up to below
7000
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the 7000
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million
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mark by 1996, at that same time period,
Japanese
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import
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imports
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was
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were
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worth around 5000
millions
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million
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of
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dollar
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dollars
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. From 1996 to 1997, Australian goods
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import
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imports
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decreased in number, followed by a slight increase in the next year. But by 1999, it suddenly dropped to 3000 mark.
On the other hand
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,
Japanese
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import
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imports
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gradually decreased to just above 4000
million
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from 1997 to 1999. The Australian
import
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experienced a surge from 1999 that continued till
mid 2000
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mid-2000
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.
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, it again started to drop till
mid 2002
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, reaching just below 5000 millions of
dollar
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dollars
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. From there it recovered to 8000
million
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by 2004. On the contrasting side, from 1999 to 2000, there was a spike in
Japanese
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import
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imports
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, followed by a gradual decline that lasted till 2004 reaching 2000
millions
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million
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of
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dollars. To summarise, both
graph
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showed
increase
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an increase
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and decrease over time,
however
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,
in
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overall
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import
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imports
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from Australia experienced
a
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an
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uphill trend,
while
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the
Japanese
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import
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experienced a downhill trend.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, import, japanese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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