One of your colleagues is leaving for a new job, and your manager has asked you to arrange a farewell party for him/her. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a place discuss the food and entertainment options that should be available Write at least 150 words.

Dear Manager, I writing
this
letter to inform you that, I have started to work on the farewell party for Mr. Ravi Patel and have selected the venue for the party, food dishes, date and time and guest lists. As 30th June is the
last
for Mr Ravi with our company, I would suggest arranging a party for 28th June at 6:00 P.M. which is Saturday which would be most suitable for everyone as It is the weekend. Because of a long list of our employees and clients, I would recommend the Maharaja Palace Hall which has a capacity of 50 people and is available at a low cost. We will have different people from different cultures, so I would suggest having food dishes both vegetarian and non-vegetarian and
also
having a music system to enjoy a dance or for entertainment. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Ankit
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Ensure that each sentence is complete and check for small grammatical errors. For instance, 'I writing this letter' should be 'I am writing this letter.'
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You provided a clear suggestion for the date, time, and location of the party, which is important for task completion.
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Your writing tone is appropriate and respectful, suitable for a letter to a manager.

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • farewell party
  • suitable date and time
  • Friday evening
  • local restaurant
  • function hall
  • private dining area
  • sufficient privacy and space
  • personalize the decor
  • variety of dishes
  • dietary preferences
  • vegetarian
  • vegan
  • gluten-free
  • speech to honor
  • light music
  • live band
  • interactive games
  • engaged and enjoys
  • memorable and enjoyable
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