The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first picture here illustrates the manufacturing procedure of
cement
and the second picture is showing
the making of concrete out of the Wrong verb form
shows
cement
for using
in construction.
The raw materials for Replace the word
use
cement
is
Change the verb form
are
limeshone
and clay, which Correct your spelling
limestone
is
crushed into Correct subject-verb agreement
are
powder
through a rolling crusher in the first stage. On the contrasting side, the concrete is made out of four ingredients, such
as,
15% Remove the comma
apply
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand and 50% gravel. Which is mixed in a
open-mouth concrete mixer, that rotates to Change the article
an
assure
a homogenous mix and produce concrete.
But for Verb problem
ensure
cement
, a closed type
cylindrical mixer is used to mix the fine Add a hyphen
closed-type
powder
made with the crusher. This
powder
get
heated in a rotating heater by a burner. The heated mixture is poured onto a conveyor belt in the next step. Change the verb form
gets
Afterward
, with the help of Change the spelling
Afterwards
conveyor
belt, it reaches Correct article usage
a conveyor
to
the grinder, where it grinds the mixture Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
into
fine
Add an article
a fine
powder
of cement
. Finally
, the cement
is packaged in the
Correct article usage
a
cement
bag for the use of the user.
Overall
, the
Correct article usage
apply
cement
production goes through five consecutive steps, starting from crushing the raw materials and ends
up as bagged Wrong verb form
ending
cement
, on the other hand
, this
cement
is used as a raw material, which turns into concrete as the final product.Submitted by mostakahmedfaysal on
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