The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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two

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bar charts give the comparison between men and women working as employees of aged 60 to 64 in four nations, namely,

Australia

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Japan

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USA

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, and

Beigium

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in year 1970 and 2000.

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, the percentage of man's employment in aged 60 to 64 shrank over the four

countries

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in 2000.

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two

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countries

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Australia

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, and

USA

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had increased by 2000,

however

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other

two

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countries

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Japan

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, and

Beigium

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displayed a discline. It can be clearly seem that, the percentage of man had worked as employees in

Beigium

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were significant dropped from 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000. In

Australia

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, which was reduced 27

percent

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in 2000.

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, 18

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of man employees in 2000 had been dropped in

two

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countries

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Japan

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, and

USA

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On the other hand

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, in

Australia

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, and

USA

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, where women still worked in aged 60 to 64 were rose steady from 18

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to 19

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, and 36percent to 38

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, from 1970 to 2000, respectively.

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, other

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countires:

Beigium

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, and

Japan

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showed slightly decrease approximately 1

percent

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to 3

percent

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in 2000.

Date Wed Jul 10 2024

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

percentage
total world population
projections
analyze
significant changes
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expected trends
employment percentages
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notable differences
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observations
data represented
bar chart
increase
decrease
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