The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The
two
bar charts give the comparison between men and women working as employees of aged 60 to 64 in four nations, namely,
Australia
,
Japan
,
USA
, and
Beigium
in year 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, the percentage of man's employment in aged 60 to 64 shrank over the four
countries
in 2000.
In contrast
,
two
countries
:
Australia
, and
USA
had increased by 2000,
however
other
two
countries
:
Japan
, and
Beigium
displayed a discline. It can be clearly seem that, the percentage of man had worked as employees in
Beigium
were significant dropped from 79% in 1970 to 19% in 2000. In
Australia
, which was reduced 27
percent
in 2000.
Further
, 18
percent
of man employees in 2000 had been dropped in
two
countries
:
Japan
, and
USA
.
On the other hand
, in
Australia
, and
USA
, where women still worked in aged 60 to 64 were rose steady from 18
percent
to 19
percent
, and 36percent to 38
percent
, from 1970 to 2000, respectively.
However
, other
two
countires:
Beigium
, and
Japan
showed slightly decrease approximately 1
percent
to 3
percent
in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, australia, japan, usa, beigium, countries, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • total world population
  • projections
  • analyze
  • significant changes
  • highlight
  • expected trends
  • employment percentages
  • identify
  • notable differences
  • summarize
  • overarching trends
  • observations
  • data represented
  • bar chart
  • increase
  • decrease
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • employment rate
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