The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The presented chart demonstrates data on the
percentage
of British people who donate to charities by diverse ages
from the periods 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the least age sector of donating is the age from 18 to 25 years old in both periods.
To begin
, the ages
from 36 to 50 years illustrate the highest percentage
as it in the peak in 1990 at 42%. In the same year, the percentage
of adults and older individuals are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
approximately
, they are 32%, 35% and 33% respectively. Youths from 18 to 25 are the least donators by 17%.
In 2010, the youths were still the lowest donors by 6%. Replace the adverb
approximate
However
, the percentage
of donors from ages
51 to 65 surpassed 40%. The donators from both ages
36 to 50 and above 65 are the same by 35%. From 36 to 50 persons are funding about 25%.
To summarize, The adults are fewer donors as a result
of the
unstable jobs and low income.Correct article usage
apply
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