The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs show the value of imported
goods
imported to New Zealand from two different countries, Japan
and Australia
, over a ten year
period.
There Add a hyphen
ten-year
appears
to be two different trends displayed on the line graphs. The trend for Change the verb form
appear
Japan
is downward as New Zealand imported goods
worth 3 billion
NZ$ in 1994 and 2 billion
in 2004. On the other hand
, figures for Australia
showed an upward trend as its goods
were the
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value
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valued
of
4 Change preposition
at
billion
at the beginning of the period and 7 billion
at the end
.
However
, there is considerable fluctuation for both countries. If we look at imports
from Japan
we could
see that the line graph displays two large peaks in 1997 and 2000 and that between these years New Zealand imported a higher Wrong verb form
can
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amount
goods
from Japan
than Australia
. Imports
from Australia
also
fluctuated and dipped twice, however
the strong recovery in the second half of the period meant they ended up with Add the comma(s)
however,
goods
worth four times the value of those from Japan
.
Overall
, we can see that imports
were far from stable from both countries but that imports
from Japan
decreased over time and those from Australia
increased.Submitted by emteeme on
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