The pie charts compare the proportions of five separated energy supplies in France in 1995 and 2005.In the generation, all types of energy production witnessed an upward trend except for petrol.

The pie charts compare the proportions of five separated energy supplies in France in 1995 and 2005.In the generation, all types of energy production witnessed an upward trend except for petrol.
The two pie charts give information about the comparison of how many five different sources
contribute
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contributed
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to the
energy
in
France
in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
it can be seen that at the beginning of the
period
, Gas was the largest
France's
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in France's
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energy
production,
while
the other contributed the lowest to
energy
supplies.
At the end
of the
period
, the percentage of Coal was the most significant to
France
's
energy
production and other has become the least
energy
segment. The figure for gas accounted for 29,63% of
France
's
energy
supply in 1995 and it had a slight increase to 30,31% in 2005.
Energy
comes from coal was 29.80% in 1995 and it experienced a regular growth of 1,93% in 2005.
In addition
, there was a steady rise in the contribution of
France
's
energy
from nuclear and other at exactly 6,40% and 4,90%, respectively
then
both figures increased regularly to 10,10% and 9,10%,
accordingly
.
In Contrast
, the proportion of petrol in
France
's
energy
started at 29,27% in the initial
period
and it fell to 19,55%
at the end
of the
period
.
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