The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The given bar chart
reveal
the percentage of Change the verb form
reveals
citizen
paying out divided into three Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
group
: Food and drink,Change to a plural noun
groups
Restauntrant
and Hotel and Correct your spelling
Restaurant
Entertaiment
among the Correct your spelling
Entertainment
differrent
age groups in the Uk in 2004.Correct your spelling
different
Overall
, after 60 times most expenditure was food and drinks
as well as
entertainment
whereas
, hostel
and eatery
were on least. Age by age we can easily see the rose
for Replace the word
rise
foods
and Fix the agreement mistake
food
drinks
although
, eatery
and Correct article usage
the eatery
hostel
Fix the agreement mistake
hostels
were
fallen except 76. For Verb problem
have
under
30, the chance of Correct pronoun usage
those under
foods
and Fix the agreement mistake
food
drinks
and entertainment
was roughly the same as 6 while
for eatery
and Correct article usage
the eatery
hostel
it was 14. For Add a comma
hostel,
31
to 45 group, English Correct article usage
the 31
people
expenditure was above tenth on Change noun form
people's
foods
and Fix the agreement mistake
food
drinks
and caffs and hospices, but 7 was on entertainment
. Between 46 to 60 runners, 16 and 14 were for foods
and Fix the agreement mistake
food
entertainment
, eatery
and hostel
proportion was same as last
mentioned groups.
The peak expenditure proportion was just below a quarter for entertainment
and foods
orders among Change the noun form
food
above
61 periods. still, the lower was only 2 on Correct article usage
the above
eatery
and hostel
for below 61, and below 75 periods also
, A fifth had foods
and caffs . Above 75 groups, entertainment
proportion was double that Correct article usage
the entertainment
eatery
and hostel
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words drinks, entertainment, hostel, eatery, foods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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