The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment involved in the process of
cement
production
and later on concrete in two separate processes.
Overall
, it can be seen that
cement
production
is a more intricate process which requires a range of machinery, including crushers, mixers, heaters, and grinders,
while
concrete
production
is simpler with only a concrete mixer to combine ingredients.
First,
concrete
production
begins with the crushing of limestone and clay into a powder, which is
then
mixed thoroughly.
This
mixture is subjected to heat in a rotating heater, converting it into clinker, which is
then
ground into
cement
. After that, the final product is bagged for use. Shifting to the second graph, in the
production
of concrete,
cement
is one of the four main ingredients. It is evident that a concrete mixer combines 15%
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel (small stones). These materials are blended completely to form concrete.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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