The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment involved in the process of
cement
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production
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and later on concrete in two separate processes.
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, it can be seen that
cement
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production
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is a more intricate process which requires a range of machinery, including crushers, mixers, heaters, and grinders,
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concrete
production
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is simpler with only a concrete mixer to combine ingredients.
First,
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concrete
production
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begins with the crushing of limestone and clay into a powder, which is
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mixed thoroughly.
This
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mixture is subjected to heat in a rotating heater, converting it into clinker, which is
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ground into
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. After that, the final product is bagged for use. Shifting to the second graph, in the
production
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of concrete,
cement
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is one of the four main ingredients. It is evident that a concrete mixer combines 15%
cement
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, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel (small stones). These materials are blended completely to form concrete.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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