The bar charts depict the percentage of diverse age groups purchasing concert, cinema, theatre tickets online during the first three months of 2013, common internet access in the UK, Australia, Malaysia.
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The bar chart depicts the percentage of diverse
age
groups most likely to buy tickets online in the beginning three
months of 2006 while
taking the help of devices such
as desktop computers, laptops, and mobile phones in three
countries.
Overall
, The 25-44 age
group in the Australia and UK used to purchase tickets for theatre, concerts, and cinema witnessed the highest rate compared to the old age
group while
Malaysia
presented the reverse pattern. Meanwhile, desktop computers became the popular gadgets used for shopping pass contrast to other devices in three
community
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communities
however
,Malaysia
was the leading.
The age
groups between 25-44 proportion of online tickets in the two English-speaking countries dramatically standout
at around 55% Correct your spelling
stand out
while
Malaysia
's rate was the lowest at about 40%. on the other hand
, the over 65 years old
population peaked in bookings in Australia and the UK at around 48% and 45% but Correct your spelling
65-year-old
Malaysia
presented a slight improvement of about 45% in contrast
to younger brackets.
Meantime, the accessory used for register pass in three
countries showed a significant trend in desktop computers (58-65%) compared to laptops (30-40%)and mobile phones (25-30%). However
, all the technology is widely utilised in Malaysia
despite the downward trend.Submitted by kiruthikakannan.pid on
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