You recently attended a job interview, but you have not heard back from the company about whether you got the job or not. Write a letter to the HR department. In your letter - describe the position you were interviewed for -explain why you think the interview was successful -say why you need to know if you've got the job or not

Dear Mam/Sir My name is Gursewak
singh
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and
last
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apply
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two
week
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ago I
was done
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did
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my job Interview in your company. Actually, I applied for
CNC
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the CNC
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machine operator position In your company and
still
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still,
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I
did
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have
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not
receive
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received
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any information about my Interview. Like I got the job or not.
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, I think that I
was
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apply
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successfully
complete
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completed
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my Interview because from my side I gave 100% and I
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had done
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done
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did
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all
quiz
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the quiz
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quistions
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Furthermore
,Next week I have my CO-UP from my college. And I need some papers from your company to complete my CO-UP. So that's why I need to know
I
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if I
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got the job or not.Thanks
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general
Make sure to proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and logical flow.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were polite and courteous, appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
You provided clear details about the position and reason for follow-up, which satisfies the task requirements.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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