You recently attended a job interview, but you have not heard back from the company about whether you got the job or not. Write a letter to the HR department. In your letter - describe the position you were interviewed for -explain why you think the interview was successful -say why you need to know if you've got the job or not
Dear Mam/Sir
My name is Gursewak
singh
and Change the capitalization
Singh
last
two Correct word choice
apply
week
ago I Fix the agreement mistake
weeks
was done
my job Interview in your company. Actually, I applied for Wrong verb form
did
CNC
machine operator position In your company and Correct article usage
the CNC
still
I Add a comma
still,
did
not Verb problem
have
receive
any information about my Interview. Like I got the job or not. Wrong verb form
received
Moreover
, I think that I was
successfully Verb problem
apply
complete
my Interview because from my side I gave 100% and I Wrong verb form
completed
Add a missing verb
had done
done
all Add the auxiliary verb
did
have done
quiz
Correct article usage
the quiz
quistions
. Correct your spelling
questions
Furthermore
,Next week I have my CO-UP from my college. And I need some papers from your company to complete my CO-UP. So that's why I need to know I
got the job or not.ThanksCorrect word choice
if I
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general
Make sure to proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structure.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and logical flow.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were polite and courteous, appropriate for a formal letter.
task achievement
You provided clear details about the position and reason for follow-up, which satisfies the task requirements.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,