The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the

consumption

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of hamburgers, fish&chips and

pizza

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in the United Kingdom from 1970 to 1990.

Overall

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, the

consumption

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of hamburgers and fish&chips has increased over the years. Despite being sold the most in 1970, the

consumption

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pizza

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has reduced over the years. Fish and chips were consumed just below 100

grams

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in 1970 and they increased gradually till 1980 to reach nearly 150

grams

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and

then

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it got drastically increased up to 500

grams

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by 1990 to be the highest

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fast food in the UK.

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, hamburgers steadily increased to reach just above 100

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by 1985 and

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it got doubled in

grams

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by 1990.

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, despite being the highest consumed food in 1970 with 300

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in total,

pizza

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demand decreased over the years. By 1990,

pizza

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consumption

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was just above 200

grams

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and

also

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it was the least-consumed fast food in Britain.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, pizza, grams with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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