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The charts below show the proportions of biritish students at one university inn .england who were able to speak another languages in addiation to England in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information

The charts below show the proportions of biritish students at one university inn .england who were able to speak another languages in addiation to England in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information
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The pie chart illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
Biritish
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British
student's
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students'
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 literacy
of
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in
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other
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another language
other languages
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language
 which
are
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is
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 French, German,
Spanish
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and Spanish
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, another
language
,
two
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and two
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 other
language
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languages
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 than English in 2000 and 2010. Units measured by
percentage
.
Overall
,
students
 who speak no other
language
was
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decreased to 10%.
Also
,
students
 who
able
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are able
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 to speak Spanish
contributes
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contribute
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most
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the highest
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percentage
both
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in both
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 pie
chart
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charts
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.
This
percentage
 was increased %
30
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from 30
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 to 35%.
In addition
,
spoken
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the spoken
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 German
language
students
percentage
 was remained both in 2000 and 2010. (10%)
Students
 who knew another
language
percentage was
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apply
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increased
15
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by 15
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% to 20%.
Also
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students
 who
spoken
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spoke
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 two other
language
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languages
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was
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apply
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increased
10
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by 10
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% to 15%. Despite
this
language
's increase,
students
 who are able to
spoken
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speak
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 French only
was
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apply
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decreased
15
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by 15
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% to 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, language, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • decade
  • comparison
  • introduction
  • increase
  • specific languages
  • addition
  • summary
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