You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went - music and lightining -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service.- great food and service -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make - more staff and more varieties

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am very happy with your service provided
on
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the
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apply
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last
weekend
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weekend's
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party
. It was
great
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a great
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party
with delightful service. The
party
was organised to celebrate
success
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the success
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of the company . As we discussed on the phone about
details
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of the
party
such
as light music in the background and different kinds of cuisine provided to guests . It went
smooth
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and every guest
enjoy
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the taste of music
as well as
dance on the floor. I am pleased with
your
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wonderful service provided to our VIP guests. Everyone at the
party
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satisfied with the arrangements of food ,especially cocktails and live performances. I would like to suggest that if you add more staff next time that it would be easy to manage guests and decorations could be done on time .
Apart from
this
, everything went wonderful and I hope we will organise more parties at your place. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal
kaur
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