You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went - music and lightining -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service.- great food and service -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make - more staff and more varieties

#party #company #hotel #manager #-describe #music #-explain #service #food #-suggest #improvements #staff #varieties

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I am very happy with your service provided

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the

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last

weekend

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party

. It was

great

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party

with delightful service. The

party

was organised to celebrate

success

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the success

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of the company . As we discussed on the phone about

details

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the details

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of the

party

such

as light music in the background and different kinds of cuisine provided to guests . It went

smooth

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and every guest

enjoy

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the taste of music

as well as

dance on the floor. I am pleased with

your

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wonderful service provided to our VIP guests. Everyone at the

party

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satisfied with the arrangements of food ,especially cocktails and live performances. I would like to suggest that if you add more staff next time that it would be easy to manage guests and decorations could be done on time .

Apart from

this

, everything went wonderful and I hope we will organise more parties at your place. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal

kaur

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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