The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and 

consumption of electricity in 2014. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays the top ten countries for electricity
production
and
consumption
in 2014, measured in
billion
kilowatt-hours. China leads with the highest
production
of 5,398
billion
kWh
and
consumption
of 5,322
billion
kWh
of electricity. The United States follows, producing 4,099
billion
kWh
and consuming 3,866
billion
kWh
.
While
Russia holds the third position in terms of
production
with 1,057
billion
kWh
and
consumption
of 1,038
billion
kWh
. Japan and India occupy the fourth and fifth positions. The former produces 936.2
billion
kWh
and consumes 856.7
billion
kWh
,
while
the latter produces 871
billion
kWh
and consumes 698.8
billion
kWh
. Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea complete the list. Canada produces 618.9
billion
kWh
and utilizes 499.9
billion
kWh
, France produces 561.2
billion
kWh
and consumes 462.9
billion
kWh
, and Brazil produces 530.7
billion
kWh
and expends 455.8
billion
kWh
. Germany's
production
and
consumption
are 526.6
billion
kWh
and 582.5
billion
kWh
, respectively, and the Republic of Korea produces 485.1
billion
kWh
and takes in 449.5
billion
kWh
. The country that has the most
production
and
consumption
is China. The country that has the least
production
and
consumption
is the Republic of Korea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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