The table shows the proportion of fifty-year-old adults who were never married over five decades in Japan. The chart represents the Japanese marriage and divorce rate from 1970 to 2016. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows the proportion of fifty-year-old adults who were never married over five decades in Japan.  The chart represents the Japanese marriage and divorce rate from 1970 to 2016.

Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The tabular column depicts the proportion of
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55-year-old
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year
old
adult
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adults
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who were never married over the
last
50 years.And the graph
repesents
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represents
the
japanese
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Japanese
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marriage and divorce numbers from 1970 to 2016.
Firstly
, The table depicts the
overall
percentage ratio of unmarried adults from the
year
1970 to 2010. As we can see
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, the ratio of
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the rate
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increased by
year
after
year
. In 1970, the ratio was about 2 percent and it was grossed to 15 by the end of 2010.
Secondly
, The graphical representation shows that
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the married couples
rate
was more common during the start of 1970 and it was about 1000 per
year
. And there was a gradual decrease in the number of rates
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going through the years and the
rate
ended up at 600 per
year
.
Moreover
, the divorce
rate
was very low during the beginning of the
year
1970. And it gradually increased
through out
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the time.
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