The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates
that
proportion of women who go to Correct determiner usage
the
compelete
their education in six countries which are Correct your spelling
complete
UK
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the UK
USA
, Canada ,Japan and Germany in 1970 and 2005. Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it can be seen that Both Canada and UK
had the same rate of female school who going to higher education in 2005.
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the UK
To begin
with, Both Canada and UK
had the same figure which is the highest number in 2005 around 60 per cent.Correct article usage
the UK
while
,
Japan had the lowest figureRemove the comma
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a
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apply
bout
19 per cent in 1970. Correct your spelling
about
Moreover
, in the UK
was increasing from 35 to reach 60 percent
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per cent
Furthermore
, Japan had 15 percent
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per cent
then
increase
until Wrong verb form
increased
reach
nearly 35 per cent.Wrong verb form
reached
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