The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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As can be seen, the
amount
of electricity that was produced in China was 5398 billion
kWh
in 2014 while
, In Brazil the amount
of electricity that was produced was roughly 10 times lower than Change preposition
in china
china
in the same year. The United States stood in second place for production and consumption at 4099 Capitalize word
China
billion
kWh
and 3866 billion
kWh
, respectively. Korea, Rep was located in the lowest of
rank, Which means Change preposition
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this
country was the least consuming country among ten countries at 449 billion
kWh
. Whereas
all the countries the amount
of production of electricity was higher than the amount
of consumption but Germany was vice versa that
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means 526.6 Correct pronoun usage
which
billion
kWh
and 582.5 billion
kWh
were the amount
of production and consumption, respectively.Submitted by arminafkhami on
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