The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement- making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The flowcharts provide key information about the stages
as well as
the equipment that are
required to produce Change the verb form
is
cement
, and how concrete is made by using cement
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the cement
-making process is a complex, multi-stage procedure starting from crushing limestone and ending with bugging. In addition
, the initial stage in cement
production involves two materials, whereas
in concrete production, four materials are used.
According to
what is shown, the first step includes crushing the limestone and clay, which after that will go through the mixer. Subsequently
, the powder mixer undergoes in the rotating heater where it will be heated. Finally
, the hot mixture goes through the grinder, then
the final product is filled into bags.
In terms of Concrete production, the cement
, water , sand, and gravel which are small stones, are mixed in the concrete mixer with different percentages of 15%, 10%, 25%, and 56% respectively.Submitted by marim.almualim on
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